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The Quietness

Posted on June 5, 2021 by creativeenvision

A sheet of layer of dust on the tables,

The chairs have not been sat on,

A dingy room and smell of staleness in the air,

The dark corners covered with webs in thick layers,

No one has visited this town,

A deserted look as you enter,

Where are the people gone?

One can hear the silence nevertheless yet so loud….

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BG on August 9, 2020 at 10:30 pm said:

Nice reflection there.

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- creativeenvision on August 10, 2020 at 8:49 am said:
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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Sustain blog on August 8, 2020 at 12:40 am said:

A lovely poem that takes us to quietness! Thank you…

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- creativeenvision on August 8, 2020 at 1:09 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much. Glad you liked it 🙂
  
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  - Sustain blog on August 8, 2020 at 5:28 pm said:
    
    You are welcome
    
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    - creativeenvision on August 9, 2020 at 9:58 pm said:
      
      🙂🙂
      
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Aashi D Parekh on August 7, 2020 at 8:47 pm said:

Yes, even I thought of classroom just like Anisha! great poem!

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- creativeenvision on August 7, 2020 at 9:44 pm said:
  
  Nice glad you could relate to it too 🙂
  
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Anisha on August 7, 2020 at 5:07 pm said:

The first two lines reminded me of a classroom visited after vacation. Amazing poem!

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- creativeenvision on August 7, 2020 at 6:43 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much. Glad you could relate to it🙂
  
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  - Anisha on August 8, 2020 at 12:03 am said:
    
    My pleasure!
    
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    - creativeenvision on August 8, 2020 at 1:08 pm said:
      
      🙂🙂
      
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